1. Does it makes sense?
2. How can I make it flow?/ Which story should I begin with? (end to beginning, beginning to end?
3. Should I bring in the children(s) point of view or keep it to only the brothers?
4. At what moment should the brothers reconcile?
5. Do you feel like this situation will make an impact on readers?/ Does it feel authentic?
2. How can I make it flow?/ Which story should I begin with? (end to beginning, beginning to end?
3. Should I bring in the children(s) point of view or keep it to only the brothers?
4. At what moment should the brothers reconcile?
5. Do you feel like this situation will make an impact on readers?/ Does it feel authentic?